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DIAMONDS ARE A GUY'S BEST FRIEND

DIAMONDS ARE A GUY'S BEST FRIEND
By Natasha Langridge-Thorpe

GENRE: Comedy, Drama
LOGLINE:

A young man lies to his Mother about his life because he is scared that she will not accept him for who he really is.

SYNOPSIS:

Tyler’s Mother is coming to visit him, but there’s a problem. Tyler has lied to his Mother for years about his life. Afraid to tell her the truth, he breaks into an expensive house and pretends that he lives there. He also convinces his roommate, Brody, to pretend to be his wife. While portraying a fabricated version of his life, Tyler starts to discover something about himself that he does not want to hide.

Phil Clarke

Too vague. Skirting the point of the story. Give more detail.

Natasha Langridge-Thorpe

Thank you for your feedback, will definitely take it on board!

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