Penny Ray: Music composer, screenwriter and author in Murphy, North Carolina.

Krista Crawford
Writing in camera directions in a script

I know that generally speaking, we shouldn't write in camera directions. I have a scene where I'm introducing my main character and it starts with her sitting in a chair in room. We see the back of the character first, and then I want to rotate angles to the front. Can I write that in? Right now, I...

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Andrea Calabrese

I think it depends how you want to sell it. If you're going to produce it yourself, anything goes...you can write anything you want. I got straight A's in Advanced Screenwriting. Plus, I won Best Scre...

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Steven Hopstaken

For quick cutting action, you can also use an "Angle on" tag as your scene line.

ANGLE ON CHAIR

Or CU if there is an important close up you don't want the camera to miss.

CU: GUN HIDDEN UNDER TABLE

Mark Pilligreen

Navigating the dos and don'ts of scriptwriting can be tricky, especially when it comes to camera directions. I once had a script where I envisioned specific shots but wasn't sure how to convey them wi...

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Brandon Brown
Finished Screenplay

Good afternoon all-

Greetings from London!

Sorry if it's a previously answered question.

I've just finished writing my first screenplay, and begun work on my second, and I'm not sure what to do with the first one now that it's done?

Not looking for money necessarily but I'd like to see it get made...

An...

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Michael A Cantu

I never put anything in the cupboard, except pasta. Register your copyright and Writers Guild. You should also look on FilmFreeway for contests. Check to see what genre your screenplay falls in and en...

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Brandon Brown

Stupid question for Clint Hill , does it matter if I live in the USA or not as to whether it can be registered with the Copyright office?

Clint Hill

Sorry I’m so late in responding. No, it doesn’t matter if you live outside the U.S. What matters is whether the work is marketed, sold, and distributed in the U.S.

“Who Can Register?” https://www.copyr...

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Chloe Haga
How many screenplays do you work on at a time?

I don’t know how I got to this place but, I’m suddenly working on three features and two shorts. That may seem overwhelming but, at least for me, It makes me never get bored, since if i get stumped with one thing or get bored with another I can work on which ever once I’m inspired to write for. I fe...

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Bryan Saunders

I usually write out descriptions of each idea so i can be better organized. Then I write out a plan with goals and subsidiary goals to stay focused for optimal production. It focuses me on one at a time, though i have 2-3 in the queue.

Jim Boston

Chloe, I usually work on two screenplays at a time.

Glad you're on Stage 32! All the VERY BEST to you!

Craig D Griffiths

I have many in various stages. Most so if I am doing bad work in one I can jump to the others. It is like getting up and going to a walk in another story. Helps reset my head.

Tony Ray
Funky Fresh Question

How do you know if your script is a 3-act or 5-act screenplay?

Craig D Griffiths

Hi Tony,

I am not sure. I know people say Shakespeare was a 5 act structure. I just write. If someone can cut it in 5 slices or 3 slices good on them.

Doug Nelson

Count 'em?

Penny Ray

I’m not really sure I understand your question. But this article may help with your story structure. https://scriptmag.com/features/the-four-act-structure...

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Personal websites to share screenplays - go or no go?

I just uploaded my first website that shares my screenplays: patrickmarcus.org.

I was hoping to get some feedback both in terms of the site's layout, whether there is need for such a site, and maybe even the content.

In return, I have some free time to look at your projects - just send me a link.

Many thanks.

Patrick Marcus

I'm overwhelmed. You guys are amazing. I'm going to incorporate your suggestions ASAP.

Patrick Marcus

Hey Jeff: I was actually able to remove the background - it looks a million times better and was so easy with the tool you recommended. I shortened the screenplay files down to 20 pages or so and I go...

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Jeff Zampino

Looks great!

Penny Ray

Repeat after me: There is no such thing as writer’s block! If you research and plan your story, the words will flow into the page (or computer screen).

Penny Ray

Alex R Price
Writing for a different ethnicity.

I am writing a character with a different ethnicity that I am unfamiliar with. Can someone point me in the right direction of who to consulte when developing dialogue, accents and behaviors of Hispanic and/or Latino characters?

Bill Costantini

Hi Alex,

Hopefully one of the Stage32 members can help you, but you also might want to send an email to Axel Caballero at the National Association of Latino Independent Producers, who would be able to...

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Craig D Griffiths

I would go hang out with some people.

I thought I knew middle eastern culture as I am god father to two Lebanese girls. But their family is more Australian in their ways. This became super obvious to...

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Penny Ray

Hello, Alex. When it comes to writing for a character of a different ethnicity, always remember that people are people. Someone’s race does not make them different from other people; their experiences...

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GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

An alcoholic races to save a dying stranger.

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Penny Ray
Screenwriter & Journalist

Hello, everyone. My name is Penny. I'm a screenwriter with a Master's degree in Professional Screenwriting and a Bachelor's in Journalism. I'm currently the Senior Reporter for The Trentonian, a daily newspaper in Trenton, New Jersey. I'm also developing two screenplays that are crime-related, one o...

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Pj Perez

Hi Penny! Fellow journalist/screenwriter here (and former East Coaster). Welcome!

Richard "RB" Botto

Hi Penny. I'm RB, Founder and CEO of Stage 32. As a screenwriter, producer, actor and filmmaker, I know first-hand the challenges all creatives face finding work, landing representation, launching projects, securing funding and simply making the connections that will make a difference in their careers. That's why I created Stage 32. Since our launch in September of 2011, the community has grown to 1,000,000+ members representing every country on the planet making Stage 32 the social network uniquely populated with the most creative people on Earth.

This is a network for you, built by you. Like...

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Amanda Toney

Hello Penny -

Welcome to the community! I'm Amanda Toney, the Managing Director at Stage 32. Since 2013 I've been proud to oversee Stage 32's Next Level Education, which provides you the most up-to-date tools necessary to become a better creative.

Over the years Stage 32 has worked with over 500 industry executives and professionals to teach online webinars, classes and intensive labs exclusively for you - our Stage 32 community. We bring you instructors who have worked directly on some of your favorite films, TV shows or theater productions to teach you in-the-trenches information that you wo...

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