THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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SOMEONE'S IN THE HOUSE
By Lowrix Wilson
After the mysterious death of her son, a divorced wife is terrorized by a clever killer who's targeting her family and friends.
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Lowrix, this is an INCREDIBLY clear logline. The only thing that I'd potentially recommend is finding a different descriptor beyond "unknown" killer. I feel like you could find something even more foreboding that would help heighten our stakes even more than they already are.
Really good job, though!
Thank you very much for the advice. I appreciate it.
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