THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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ONEWORLD
By Bob Bowse
On a business trip to Amsterdam, a U.S. patent attorney becomes mixed up with a war criminal being hunted by teams of assassins as part of a secret end-times game sponsored by the Vatican.
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Interesting concept, Bob. The logline is a little dense. I would start with the protagonist first - who he is, his goals, his obstacles - and try to simplify the rest.
Thanks, RB. That's a great idea. I'll work on it...
Most welcome, Bob.
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