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A young Latina political activist is led astray by an ex-Marine turned small-time criminal, wrapping her up in a convoluted bank robbing scheme and landing them hunted by a Louisiana State Trooper determined to save his tarnished reputation.
-Finalist Sundance Episodic Lab
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Finalist - Sundance Episodic Lab
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Its got a good storyline, I think it needs a rethink on the characters. Why its have to be a broken soldier.. it could be a bad cop and then its a group of these bad cop guys and gals who are in charge of investigation, being the ones robbing.. and its a 5. same layout. And, what if the Political Stance is the bad side being supported, but like comedic like, is why they like each other, budding their romance? And What Kind of Chase ? What Happens?