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SYNOPSIS:
Brief: Presenting a story of a family Of three members Janet, Zenith and Ravi, living in a wonderful neighbourhood surrounded with generous people. Ravi Is into constructing eco friendly residences across the city whereas Zenith is a wise woman and an intelligent children counsellor. Kaushik, one of their neighbour is a scientist who plays an integral role in Janet's life through her journey of learning about the cosmic and quantum power. They both share a friendly bond whereas Kaushik's dog Zullu loves the company of Janet more than of Kaushik. Ramanathan, Janet's school dean plays the character of a mentor who sees the great potential in Janet and provides Janet illuminating chances to expose her gifts in her journey of evolution, ascension and expansion. Janet grows up as a healer, guide, author, way shower and a leader who lives and preaches to live and let live mindfully with the greater purpose of love, peace and unity. Kaushik marries his love Ashley who also served as a scientist along with him in his earlier days and lived in the same neighbourhood of Janet and Kaushik. Janet meets her soulmate Rumi in the later stage of the story and discovers the passionate lover inside of her that always knew about her divine counterpart who will enter into her life and sweep off her feet instantly in their first encounter. Rumi is a renowned, successful and prolific painting artist, creates multidimensional art as well as mentors the aspiring artists to find their purpose behind the art before they set their vision towards the journey of accomplishment. Janet and Rumi finds their divine partner in each other and takes a chance to discover new possibilities in life together as creative partners.
Too long, Monalisha. Try whittling this idea down to a couple of lines max.
Feedback appreciated, working on it best regards M