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While on a dig, an Archeologist discovers an ancient tomb. Written on the cover is a curse. “He who defiles this holy place shall bring about the Fall of Man.” He opens it of course, and it nearly does.
SYNOPSIS:
Dr. Obadiah Featherstone is an Archeologist from Claymore College. While on a solo dig in the outback of Abylonia he finds something that he thinks will win him the Nobel Prize, The Lost Tomb of Zaaaffaaar the Great.
Ignoring the curse, he enters the tomb. Instead of heaps of Gold and Jewels he finds a simple box-like Object on a stone pedestal. He has no idea what the thing could be.
Back at camp, Obadiah notices something strange. Dr. Amelia Honeywell, the quite elderly leader of the expedition begins to act…rather amorously towards him. And just as soon as she starts behaving more and more so, she collapses and dies.
Back at Claymore College, with the help of his old friend, Professor Lucius Niemeyer, he discovers something quite amazing. The Device is capable of heightening the…Shall we say…Emotional State of Human Beings. And Killing them in the process. Love becomes Lust, Dislike becomes sheer Hatred, Anxiety becomes…Etc.
Within one year the Device has decimated Humanity. And just as he’s about to pull the trigger of the pistol that will end his now miserable life, Obadiah Featherstone remembers the curse as he sees the artifact on his desk.
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