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A man's love and devotion to the entertainment business aren't enough to suppress his resentment for his successful girlfriend.
SYNOPSIS:
A man who desires to become a movie star in 1970s Hollywood CA, is unable to accept the frustrations of a stalled career while his girlfriend enjoys success.
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Hey Lourvey, I think your synopsis works as a better logline! The little bit of extra detail helps make the story sound more compelling and unique. I like the addition of the 1970's setting, and the description of his emotions - both help paint a bigger picture of the story. Great work!