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MYCOUNTRY 2030
By Harpreet Raj Singh
SYNOPSIS:
Disillusioned by the present political scenario of her country named Mycountry(a nation plagued by religious intolerance, inequity, gender biases, racism/casteism etc.,endemic poverty, unconquerable corruption), a young professional leaves her high paying job to start a political party named 'SDG party of Mycountry' . She starts the political party with the sole Agenda and Manifesto as the Sustainable Development Goals agenda 2030. And she slowly grows this party with likeminded people who commit to no other distractions than the SDG2030 agenda and Manifesto. Slowly and steadily not only they gain popular support but also the moral support of all the present political parties as the SDG2030 party of Mycountry is against no one and embellishes no one. It has no polarising effect whatsoever and even gets into alliance with most parties with a single minded determination to achieve SDGs for Mycountry by 2030.
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This is just my opinion but your logline is too long and wordy. It doesn't capture the essence of the story. Try this one:
"Disillusioned by current government, a young professional, leaves her high paying job to start a political party and must overcome the inbred prejudice of the people and the ruthless grip of those in power."