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WHAT HAPPENED IN FOLSOM
By Stephanie Elie
In the midst of a quarter-life crisis, a self-help junkie follows clues from her dead sister to uncover a conspiracy and track down her killer, all while learning more about herself and the sister she never knew.
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Interesting concept. Maybe change "Arden" to an adjective and job title/role. You could also add a comma before "all while..." so readers don't get winded when they read the sentence.
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