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A cash drop off to apartment six goes horribly right when it should have been made to number nine.
SYNOPSIS:
Stan and Brenda have been tasked to make a drop-off for their boss. Brenda is the driver and Stan, all dressed for the part, heads into the apartment block to find number six.
He finds an old man, Marvin, at home and enquires about his contact, Sam. Marvin says Sam’s not home now, but let’s Stan in. Stan hands him two flight tickets to Jamaica, a case full of cash and instructions to book into a hotel and mingle like normal vacationers and to remember to pick up the big prize.
Wasting no time, Stan leaves, relieved to have completed the job successfully.
Samantha returns home and passes Samuel, also nicknamed Sam, and enquires about his mother. Samuel, typical teenager, isn’t interested in conversing with the old lady and heads for his apartment two doors down.
Samantha tries to fix the number outside their apartment by sliding it back into place to display as a nine, but it slides back into position six.
She heads inside to be greeted by a very excited Marvin who shows her the wins and shares his excitement, believing that one of the many contests she is always entering is finally a winner.
This script has been picked up for production by Ron Harris of Stargazersfilmco. Very excited about this development.