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Aiden, Claire, Terra and Dylan (17) are teen witches whose dark past
permeates their young lives. They know their mother's made a pact to
get pregnant by one man to keep their Lumine (good witches) bloodline
pure. But, the young women were tricked by the devil and became
pregnant by him instead. After their mothers' mysterious deaths, the
kids (being raised by a former Madam) must try to get a handle on
their uncontrollable magical powers, fight the devil (their father)
all while attending high school and a dealing with a magical talking
doll.
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Hi Regina, Nick is right, It's way too long for a Logline, but it would make a great Synopsis. Review some of the Loglines used on NetFlix to get some good examples. Or Amazon Prime.
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