Another great story. I can't wait to read these. Who is the protagonist here, Sophia or Ntara? The logline needs to focus on the main character.

Sophia... Maya doesn't kill Sophia. That is where the twist and the complexity of the story begins.

.....but yes now that you have mentioned it, l need to rework the synopsis. Thank you, Matt.

Hello Thoko, great job and input from Matt. I will email you some info on loglines that may help.

@Art...thank you. I look forward to your email.

Thank you for the 5 Star rating Nathaniel!!!