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MARTIAL ARTS PETS
By Cee Whirx
Hoping to become a martial arts hero, a young kung fu cat teams up with other pet warriors, each possessing unique skills in martial arts, to battle evil forces despite pets not being considered "true" martial arts animals.
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Great concept, Cee Whirx! I think your logline could be tightened up some. Something like: "Hoping to become a martial arts hero, a young Kung Fu cat teams up with other household pets possessing martial arts skills to fight bad guys in a world where domesticated animals aren't allowed to be martial artists."
I removed "aspiring" because you already put "Hoping to become a martial arts hero."
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Hi Cee, how's Ryder and the deer Guardians going?
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Billy Kwack things are coming along slowly.
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Can't wait to see Cee
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