THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
Post your loglines. Get and give feedback.
MAYFLOWER DESCENDANTS
By Lindsay Aichinger
When a troubled environmental activist fighting to save her brother's life from chemical exposure finds out about an invisible elitist family line dominating American business and politics, she teams up with a newly found descendant to expose the family line to the world.
Register / Log In
1 person likes this
This is giving me National Treasure vibes for sure! I do wonder if "exposing the family line" is the ultimate victory though. Wouldn't the ultimate victory be saving her brother? I think if you can just wrap it up with how exposing one saves the other, then your setup will resonate with as much force as your ending. Neat idea, tho! I'm all about that intrigue!
Rated this logline