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After a professional assassin on the run finds himself trapped in a rural MegaMart on Christmas Eve, he must join forces with the big box store employees to fight an elite force of mercenaries in a deadly after hours battle for their lives. JOHN WICK meets SUPERSTORE
*Top 1% rated script on Coverfly
SYNOPSIS:
Title: Checkout
Writers: Hunter M. Davis & Bryan Bock
Genre: Action/Thriller
Type: Fully contained Feature
Budget: Under $30MM
Accolades: Top 1% rated script on Coverfly, Placement on The Red List, Excellent Coverage Scores, Top Finalist at PAGE, NashFilm, Emerging Screenwriters, and more.
Logline: After a professional assassin on the run finds himself trapped in a rural MegaMart on Christmas Eve, he must join forces with the big box store employees to fight an elite force of mercenaries in a deadly after hours battle for their lives.
Comps: JOHN WICK meets SUPERSTORE
Tagline: "They should've shopped online."
Tone: A wildly entertaining action-packed romp filled with inventive action sequences, dynamic characters, and just the right amount of humor. (One-liners never die!)
Hunter Davis Bio: After countless late night sessions, 10,000+ hours of discovery, and the occasional satisfying breakthrough, Hunter has learned one limited, but potentially useful skill...how to write a likable screenplay. Heavily influenced by the nostalgic original cinema of the 80's & 90's, Hunter specializes in commercially viable action thrillers infused with premium dialogue, elevated suspense, and wildly unpredictable twists. Over the course of his aspiring career, Hunter has won a variety of screenplay contests, received top coverage scores, and earned placement on The Red List. Hunter currently has multiple scripts under option, including his sci-fi/action spec, The Drome, now under option with studio producer, Lucas Foster (Ford vs. Ferrari, Law Abiding Citizen, Bad Boys). As a recognized dialogue specialist, Hunter guarantees you'll enjoy his signature authentic character exchanges or you can slap him directly in the face. (One hit, medium strength.)
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