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When the sheltered daughter of a Royal Guard, fled the Royal Spotlight to escape her Father’s overprotective ways-she returned home with a request; one that would determine an entire nation's future.
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Natalie Baldwin the beautiful daughter of Richard Baldwin a Royal Guard is the result of a forgotten romance. At age five Natalie, by her own curiosity discovered her unknown father’s contact information and phoned him in England. Discovering that he has a daughter, an only child, Richard flew to the Caribbean Island and brought his daughter back to England. They were like two peas in a pod and nothing else mattered to Richard than to be the best Father he could be; ensuring that nothing comes between him and his beloved daughter. As Richard’s daughter, Natalie has won the heart of friends and strangers alike; bringing joy, humor and charm to everyone who knew her. At age eighteen, upset with her Father for denying her the only thing she thought mattered and finally fed up of living life under the spotlight, Natalie left London. Still unable to find the freedom she sought, she flew to California to be with a Cousin. While in California: Natalie met handsome, driven, Phillip Lane and fell madly in love. After Phillip proposed marriage, bound by her British tradition, the couple flew to England to obtain her stubborn father’s approval to marry; just in time to fulfill a forgotten, long awaited promise she’d made to the Prince of Edinburgh.
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Wow, thank you so much for your support Nathaniel!
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Natlie Pitt here is the website to learn how to write a proper logline - Bes to luck https://screencraft.org/2020/02/26/the-simple-guide-to-writing-a-logline/
Kacee Diehl DeMassi you're just jealous
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Great Read-I purchased the Novel on Amazon! You are a fantastic writer!