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A high-flying financier awakens from a coma to find that his wife is having an affair with his boss. Left with nothing and struggling with his health, he must start a new life whilst trying to save a friend’s business from being stolen.
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If you lose the "is" and add victim "to a near-fatal...", I think it looks good.
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