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KING OF THE WORLD BOOK 1 CHAPTER 2 THE GUILD ENTRANCE EXAM
By Steven Gibson
Michael and friends go into the Magic Guild Entrance Exam to show off their magic powers to the guild leaders at the magic guild entrance exam.
SYNOPSIS:
After getting his new magical powers from a wishing well, Michael now uses his new magical powers to join the Magic Guild Entrance Exam so he can join a traveling wizards guild to travel Globleo and find the crown to the King of the World.
KING OF THE WORLD BOOK 1 CHAPTER 2 THE GUILD ENTRANCE EXAM
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this is not a logline per se - there are no character names in loglines also explain what the magic guild is without using the word magic -- this is very confusing and have no idea what your story even is
Hello Steven. As a suggestion, you can use this template: 'When X (inciting incident) happens, THIS (Adjective/Profession) PERSON needs to Battle/Face/Overcome THIS in order to Active Verb/Goal THIS before/or else THIS occurs.'
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