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Billy Kwack
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STAR CHILD
By Billy Kwack

GENRE: Fantasy

LOGLINE: The chosen six heroes from planet Unite, are the only hope for the innocent 100 worlds to stop and end the dangerous King, Dune, majors and the planet crushers and the danger is heading to Earth

SYNOPSIS:

In the beginning magic fell in the hands of the enemy first, King, leader, Kings body is pure strong metal, strongest metal known. The 5 majors, masters of the elements, the army of planet crushers and there most important Dune, a dark healer. Making King and majors dangerous and unstoppable. The 100 innocent world's, can't stop them, they realize they must fight magic with magic

Amazing Kacee

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- Mark Deuce
- Robert Sacchi
4 years ago

Your logline makes so sense here is a link to create a killer logline - Good Luck! https://screencraft.org/2020/02/26/the-simple-guide-to-writing-a-logline/

Billy Kwack

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- Mark Deuce
4 years ago

Thank you Kacee, I tried my best

Robert Sacchi

4 years ago

Rated this logline

Frank Baruch

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- Robin Gregory
4 years ago

Hey Billy. I think I kind of understand the basic premise and can maybe help you on your logline a little. (Six heroes with varying degrees of elemental power must stop a seemingly indestructible King and his minions from (ruling? destroying?) the "100 worlds" and their innocent inhabitants, or face destruction themselves.) Lmk if this works?