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THE CULTURE CLUB.
By Gerad Woolsey
SYNOPSIS:
The Culture Club is a thriller infused dramady focusing on three stories and the chain of events that unites them. After botching the robbery of his own pawn shop, Mr. Darcy's desperation grows as his life deteriorates. Meanwhile, Dante's future couldn't be brighter. He is a highly-recruited high school football star with a loving family and a bright future. Aside from needy coaches and meaty defenses, Dante's biggest concern is helping his girlfriend, Corbin, expand an after-school program she started named the Culture Club. But after a deadly encounter with Marcus, Brent, and Tyson, a trio of violent relatives, Dante's priorities change as he fights to protect his family and the things he values most.
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Hey Gerad, First of all, congrats on having written a feature film screenplay, which is the hardest thing to do, with many giving up. I've a few minor comments based on your synopsis above, and you can do with them as you wish :) Although I'm a Brit I think the story has potential in that, when Dante's violent relatives come to town and there's a death, there exists clear possibilities for good conflict and drama. Good luck with it! Matt