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RUSTY
By Kurt Empey

GENRE: Comedy
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A dog saves a young boy from bullies while the boy's unemployed father takes drastic measures to save his family from financial ruin.

RUSTY

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Tasha Lewis

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Maurice Vaughan

The concept's interesting, Kurt Empey, but the logline doesn't tell us enough.

Here's a logline template that I use. It might help you: "After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (the protagonist with an adjective) tries to _______ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)."

Nate Rymer

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Derek C. Block

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Derek C. Block

Kurt Empey what does the boy and his dog do? is there a sacrifice of some kind made for the devastated community? Does the boy enter his dog in a competition and the dog becomes "viral" online, netting the boy millions, which he turns over to the community leaders to help disadvantaged people? What happens?

B A Mason

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Nathaniel Baker

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