The concept's interesting, Kurt Empey, but the logline doesn't tell us enough.
Here's a logline template that I use. It might help you: "After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (the protagonist with an adjective) tries to _______ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)."
Kurt Empey what does the boy and his dog do? is there a sacrifice of some kind made for the devastated community? Does the boy enter his dog in a competition and the dog becomes "viral" online, netting the boy millions, which he turns over to the community leaders to help disadvantaged people? What happens?
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The concept's interesting, Kurt Empey, but the logline doesn't tell us enough.
Here's a logline template that I use. It might help you: "After ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (the protagonist with an adjective) tries to _______ (goal of story) so ________ (stakes)."
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Kurt Empey what does the boy and his dog do? is there a sacrifice of some kind made for the devastated community? Does the boy enter his dog in a competition and the dog becomes "viral" online, netting the boy millions, which he turns over to the community leaders to help disadvantaged people? What happens?
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