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DON'T TURN AROUND

DON'T TURN AROUND
By Lawrence Whitener

GENRE: Horror
LOGLINE:

Family of four trapped in an abandoned carnival are hunted by bad-ass bikers. Soon their hunters also become the hunted as all learn, Don't Turn Around, there IS something behind you. 8 Awards on IMDb. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yE-eU2F2yGU&rco=1

SYNOPSIS:

The four all-different-ethnics family go on a camping trip to reconnect. Frank is an Army Ranger recovering from PTSD. His beautiful African-American wife, Beyonce, is his steadfast supporter. Their two adopted children, East Indian Aadhya and Asian computer-geek Ryan, constantly sibling bicker. When their minivan's tire is "attacked" by a coyote trap in the middle of nowhere, they seek help in an abandoned carnival. Its caretaker is a Canadian Lurch. When drug-selling bikers arrive, the real Fun starts as the four Funns hide until separated by trap-doors, rotating corners, and secret passageways. The Entity soon makes its presence known by exhaling breath-fogs over all their shoulders. Everyone soon learns, Don't Turn Around, there IS something behind you.

DON'T TURN AROUND

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