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DON'T TURN AROUND - PILOT TO SERIES

DON'T TURN AROUND - PILOT TO SERIES
By Lawrence Whitener

GENRE: Horror
LOGLINE:

Family of four are trapped in an abandoned carnival hunted by bad-ass bikers. Soon the hunters become the hunted as all learn, Don't Turn Around, there IS something behind you. 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yE-eU2F2yGU&rco=1

SYNOPSIS:

The all-different-ethnics Funn family go on a camping trip to reconnect. Frank is an Army Ranger recovering from PTSD. His beautiful African-American wife, Beyonce, is his steadfast supporter. Their two adopted children, East Indian Aadhya and Asian computer-geek Ryan, constantly sibling-bicker. When their minivan's tire is "attacked" by a coyote trap in the middle of nowhere, they seek help in an abandoned carnival. Its caretaker, Goober, is a Canadian Lurch. When drug-selling bikers arrive, the Funns hide until separated by trap-doors, rotating corners, and secret passageways. The Entity soon makes its presence known by exhaling breath-fogs over their shoulders. All soon learn, Don't Turn Around, there IS something behind you.

DON'T TURN AROUND - PILOT TO SERIES

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