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LAW & ORDER...AND THE MOB - PILOT
By Lawrence Whitener
A forbidden romance, murder, betrayal, more death, and treachery, all within the NYC Mob. Family, they will be the death of you. Based on the true story a D.E.A. Agent's murder and his best friend's relentless retribution.
SYNOPSIS:
Based on extensive research, this true crime story centers around love and family, and what those two emotions can make people do. Mob Captain Jerry Chilli loved a steroid-popping muscle-boy like his own son. Jerry's only daughter loved the same married palooka in secret. Both hid this murderer from The Mob and each other for eight months until it was kill or be killed. "Family"...they will be the death of you.
LAW & ORDER...AND THE MOB - PILOT
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Wow, Lawrence, that's a really intriguing story with a great material. The text you wrote is very catchy, but, in my understanding (I might be wrong), is not quite a logline, it's more a synopsis. Here's a suggestion for a logline, 'Based on a true story, after the first assassination of a NYC D.E.A. undercover agent, a manhunt for his mobster murderers is unleashed, including Mob Boss John Gotti.'
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