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Four special forces soldiers wake in a dark cell shackled together. They all know each other, but for how long?
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Four Special Ops soldiers awake in a dark cell shackled together.They are being tortured to forget their last FUBAR mission videotaped by a news crew.
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Great title, Lawrence Whitener!
I think your logline needs some more information.
Something like: "After four Special Forces soldiers wake in a dark cell shackled, they _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes).”
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