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After turning 18, an orphan finds himself in a surreal dark world where his uncle is the evil monarch he has to fight in order to survive.
SYNOPSIS:
This is a story about KIT, our protagonist who is
celebrating his 18th birthday at the beginning of the story.
His parents are dead, so he lives with his two uncles UBEL
and KERES.
The morning after his birthday, Kit wakes up in his house in
complete darkness; there’s not a single light or window
anywhere. His uncle Ubel tells him that they have entered a
new world, where their only hope of survival is the only
source of light, the candles. In complete darkness, they
would turn into wax figures and then disappear. Kit tries
to escape but realizes that the house has turned into a
maze.
Kit starts to work hard every day, melting wax and making
new candles. He finally understands that when darkness takes
away a life, the light can slowly bring it back. He
discovers this when he gets his parrot back to life using
the candles.
When Ubel finds out that he knows this, he locks him up in
the basement of their workshop. Kit is reunited with his
other uncle down there, who’s on the edge of dying. They
make a plan how to escape from Ubel’s madness, while the
threat of darkness gets stronger day by day. Before they
pull everything off, Ubel finds everything out.
Kit has to sacrifice his parrot, which he was trying to save
the entire story. He’s brought to a moral dilemma where he
has to turn into a selfish person.
Once they outsmart Ubel, who was supposed the be the bad
guy, Keres takes his place and continues to do the same
things that Ubel did, Kit stays the same, continuing to work
on the candles every day to provide light.
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After he turns eighteen, an orphan who travels to a dark, surreal land struggles to survive the evil monarch - his uncle - who marks him for death.
The question is, how does he find himself there, or in the rewrite, travel?
Evocative title, BTW.
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