It seems interesting, but it does feel a bit too busy in terms of the amount of people being referenced. Three sisters all protagonists, a group of corrupt cops all being antagonists; seems like a lot of people to keep up with during the actual read, but just my opinion! Would it be possible that it was only a sheriff, or a deputy, etc.?
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It seems interesting, but it does feel a bit too busy in terms of the amount of people being referenced. Three sisters all protagonists, a group of corrupt cops all being antagonists; seems like a lot of people to keep up with during the actual read, but just my opinion! Would it be possible that it was only a sheriff, or a deputy, etc.?
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