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Andy's world is falling apart as he waits for his long lost girlfriend Zara to return.
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Andy is a broken man. He hears his ex-girlfriend Zara's voice echo through the madness that slowly engulfs him as he dredges his sorry existence through the streets of the city they lived in.
She promised him that she'd return, one day. She promised him she'd meet him at the corner. Which corner? Any corner.
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Andy is a broken man. He hears his ex-girlfriend Zara's voice echo through the madness that slowly engulfs him as he dredges...
Andy is a broken man, his ex-girlfriend Zara's voice echo through the madness that slowly engulfs him as he dredges... along... with his... (HOLD UP I think it's too much we don't know him at all to make that a reality.)
She promised him that she'd return, one day. She promised him she'd meet him at the corner. Which corner? Any corner.
Zara promised him that she'd return one day, and promised him she'd meet him at the corner.
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As a gent called Andy and with an ex called Zara, I felt this one! Haha Sounds intriguing!