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A high school teenager experiences a laser gun accident, unleashing the altered reality
gift on appearing on flatscreen and electronic devices, bringing him both great
opportunities and great challenges.
SYNOPSIS:
Spiderman, Quantum Leap, Mighty Max, Max Headroom
James a star, Entrepreneur, and a self-cast member. Fans adore him, so they
called him “MINDBOGLER”. Because he has tricks behind his sleeves on
stream, so many others think he’s like a magician. Other cast members never
auditioned or rehearsed with the teenager.
Although, Owens gets so bottled up by himself, doing his own dirty work. The
situation is rather unusual. He has good ratings in front of the screen of many
fans, which James enjoys the comfort of.
But, when James doesn’t like to reveal his unique gift personally in front of the public.
The gift that he chose to use, which started from within the past that he didn’t realizes back then, till now.
After the accident, from within the beginning, he failed to reconsider the danger by a motive to fire a laser gun; that blasted upon himself.
That causes a hazardous beam deflected directly at the ongoing flatscreen
device itself. In his own bedroom. Which goes directly towards Owens, blindly
unconscious.
Boy is he in for a treat, by taking possession of that weapon
from a laboratory inside a private upper-class mansion.
The mansion property belongs to both his nerdy classmate, Jeff and his father
who's the Professor. They both are geniuses, and very unreconciled family
tides to James Owen’s admiration.
Later, Owens learned that he developed more of his gift. He's acrobatic
combined with combat fighting skills, and a bit of martial arts. He travels
along the paths of genre within those devices while he remains to be secretly
trained from the alternate reality and our world of documentaries and ect..
By taking advantage from here to there, he takes sides to defend somebody as
well as himself.
Undoubtedly, he prefers fame again to gain wealth potential. Besides, he
sometimes likes to serve justice continuously at the bare minimum without
any need of assistance. So minimum, that he likes stalking troublemakers
who have curious mindsets into not knowing him, thats not visual.
However, Owens faces a difficult challenge, by using his gift thats usually not
attentionally good at Zeonar. When he escapes out of nowhere, he cannot tell
or detect Owens because of his corruption. So, therefore, Owens at times can
possibly search quietly, behind the Mastermind tracks from other ruthless
men, by word of mouth.
How unfortunate now that Owens doesn’t want to have too much attention.
Attention that he displeases fame towards the paparazzi and the mainstream
media coverage.
Even though, without proof of no markings and fingerprints of James Owens
secrets. His gifts give him the satisfaction to discover many mysterious ways
for himself to not interfere cluelessly. Without having to be afraid of anyone,
including whats within the genre of the flatscreen and electronic devices.
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Hello I refixed my punctuation of the Protagonist! Checkout the trailer:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-CA7L5CmL58
Theme song:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6p3SooyEZAo
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MINDBOGLER. I love the name, real super hero title that could fit in with the darker side of comic book culture.
I would suggest looking at 2000AD comic book style storytelling. I'm sure you'll find alot to expand on.
Good luck :)
Hey! I've been taken three pitch sessions on this. Its extraordinary how I realize that I had to be confidence to break the concept down and answering unexpected questions. Interesting to know. Thank you for that suggestion, but I only do short and film scripts in related to this character.
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Feel reread my revised logline and synopsis.
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