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BREAKER LANE (THE MUSICAL)
By Sara Dinga
A pampered cheerleader struggles to reinvent herself as a competitive surfer and win "Breaker Lane" - Santa Cruz's white-knuckle surf contest.
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To request a copy of the BREAKER LANE screenplay, view the trailer and pitch deck, or listen to a sampling of original songs, please visit www.breakerlane.com. Thank you!
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It starts super well I'd just add more info, like what made her start surfing and what the challenges she faces. Something like ... - A spoiled, prima donna cheerleader rediscovers her love for competitive surfing (after she got kicked out from the team) during one long, hot summer in Santa Cruz (and now needs to win... in order to achieve or prove something... )
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