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Four female superheroes fight hard to keep bad guys out of their city but can't seem to keep them out of their beds. Let's face it: Dating can be criminal.
SYNOPSIS:
By day, our four lady heroes provide cyber and physical security for corporations and high-powered individuals. By night, they're superhero vigilantes, wielding energy-powered accessories that hale them defeat the dark forces that attack their beloved city. In between, they try to find love. And while they might be able to protect an entire city, they have a harder time trying to protect their own hearts.
The crimes uncovered throughout the city: theft, violence, accidents, and other unforeseen problems, parallel issues our heroes discover in their dating lives. The show will be equally focused on the every day lives of there four woman, their friendships, day-to-day problems (even superheroes deal with jealousy, insecurities, and sometime go back to a cheating ex for good make up sex.
SUPER SINGLES is about four intelligent woman, dressed to impress, kicking ass, and dating losers.
I love this idea, the title is great, and would 100% watch this but the logline could be condensed to one sentence. "out of their beds, because let's face it, dating can be criminal. Maybe edit it down a little, do you really need words like "hard" and "seem to". (it's tough) :)
When [INCITING INCIDENT OCCURS]…
A [CHARACTER TYPE]…
Must [OBJECTIVE]…
Before [STAKES].
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Thanks for the feedback, Dustin!
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