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When a freak accident transports broke, melancholy, eccentric Edgar Allan Poe and his wisecracking raven into 21st century Baltimore, they make ends meet by solving mysteries and crimes as private detectives. ...If only Edgar could get people to believe that he is the real Poe.
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This sounds really unique, Mindy Strouse. One suggestion: I would remove one of the adjectives "broke, melancholy, eccentric." I think three adjectives are too many.
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Thanks for the compliment & the note Maurice Vaughan! Loglines are hard! (I'm new at this.)
This script just advanced to Quarterfinalist in the ScreenCraft Animation Competition!
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