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THE BODYBAGS
By Oleh Holyzov
Late for class, a group of teenagers realizes that everyone inside the building of their high school has now mysteriously vanished, leaving the corridors strewn with odd, out-of-place items. Upon discovering that local law enforcement officials are on the trail of a murderer who somehow managed to preserve his victim's body inside a small cube displayed during an art exhibition, the classmates come to the conclusion that all their missing friends may still be inside the building of a school.
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Hey Oleh. I must tell you, this is definitely a super intriguing concept, I love it! I'll surely watch it when it becomes a movie. Only the logline is a bit too long. Here's a suggestion: "When a group of teenagers comes late for classes, they realize everyone inside the school building has mysteriously disappeared, making them suspect a serial killer is at work in there." The further details can go in the synopsis.
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Thanks, Marcos! Yes, I agree, it's probably the longest one of all, haha. I just thought that by shortening it loses some flavor. Conceivably if I add a synopsis I'll abridge it that way (sorry, I'm very lazy hahaha).
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And thank you all for the ranking!
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You're welcome, Oleh.
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Interesting. Love the poster art!
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Love the concept. Agreed the logline is too wordy could be GREAT if shortened, but I’m thoroughly intrigued, I would love to read the script or hopefully one day see the film ;)