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VIOLENT ENDS: HAMLET "THUS BAD BEGINS"
By Kaitlyn Lynch
After the Danish king's sudden death, a pair of best friends navigate the castle's treacherous political climate while concealing the prince's revenge plot against his uncle -- the new king.
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Hi, Kaitlyn Lynch. Great logline. I can picture a dramatic, thrilling movie. I have one suggestion: Change "a pair of best friends must navigate" to "a pair of best friends navigates."
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Maurice Vaughan Great suggestion, thank you so much!! Have implemented this.
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You're welcome, Kaitlyn Lynch. What's your plan for the script?
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Maurice Vaughan This one was actually the first full script I wrote! Has been finished for two years now, edited to hell and back, did a wonderful table read. I'm shopping with my agent as well as submitting to open writing calls on here!
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Hope you and your agent can get the script sold. Kaitlyn Lynch. Are you talking about the Open Writing Assignments in the Writers' Room?
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Maurice Vaughan Yes! Sorry, I'm trying to get myself to be more active here and it's a little rough just because I'm really not a social media person, so I'm trying my best to make it sound like I know what I'm talking about when it comes to Stage 32 things lol. Thank you!!
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You're welcome, Kaitlyn Lynch. How is the script shopping and pitching going?