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SYNOPSIS:
Myrr is an animated series about the adventures of a kid named Grik—who also happens to be a GIANT! When Grik finds himself lost in a strange land, he befriends some magical beings who pledge to aid him in his quest to return home. The group embarks on an epic adventure filled with magical creatures, unforeseen dangers, and the unbreakable bonds of friendship! Grik’s story is inspired by several things, including literature, fantasy, and the trope of receiving a quest and going on adventures with friends—where anything is possible! Sometimes, Grik and his friends will fail, while other times, they’ll succeed. They’ll make mistakes, argue, and discover that they don’t always agree on everything. But ultimately, they’ll learn that they can always trust each other. And that’s because, throughout this series, they will have developed a deeply meaningful fellowship, the basis for life-long friendships. Myrr is about finding one’s true place in the world—and how nothing is more important than the love of friends, family, and home. And that’s its real strength!
This sounds exciting, Jacqueline Sandee Valle! Your logline is long though (42 words). Maybe cut some words.
Something like: “Lost in a magical realm, a giant kid forms an unbreakable bond with four enchanted beings as they help him find his way home through an epic adventure filled with fun, danger, and mystical encounters!” (35 words)
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