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On his way to town to change his life, a young sailor
rescues a woman from a rape unknowing that she has a secret: is a mermaid
SYNOPSIS:
P
ort area, a sailor looks at the flyer of a TV show, it
seems the right opportunity to leave the bay and go
to the city in search of success. Thales smokes a
cigarette and spitting on the ground with contempt
walks away. After hours of walking he arrives at a
bus stand where he meets Pearl, a street woman
forcibly held by a brute. When Thales meets Pearl's
eyes, a distant voice asks for help ...
While Thales waits for her vehicle to go to town, Pearl is
attacked, Thales steps in to save her. Behind them the bus to
the city leaves ... Thales loses his chance to go but not the
courage to leave. Thales takes the bag and runs on foot
following the road traveled by the bus until he finds himself in
front of a point inaccessible on foot, where the road
disappears into a Mediterranean scrub, this does not stop
Thales who enters the scrub, tumbling to the ground after that
his shoe breaks. This is the most difficult time for Thales who
lies on the ground defeated by his own dream. Someone
darkens his face, Thales notices Pearl. He followed him. The
woman invites him to reflect in nature and to contemplate the
city in the distance while they are sharing their dreams and
their inner worlds, Pearl collapses lifeless
Thales realizes that Pearl is a mermaid who has left her
world to seek success and fail. Alone and abandoned,
Thales decides to bring Pearl to safety but this discourages
him from going to the hospital, for her the only salvation
can only be water ...
Alba, Thales walks near the pier (there is none) to a point
where the water is calm. She advances in the water up to
her waist with Pearl in her arms, freeing her in the water.
Her figure vanishes under the water, a few long seconds
pass where a sinister silence seems to hang over Thales ...
Something grabs him to drag him into the water ...
Pearl, a sweet woman, with young, slender features and
wrapped in an angelic dress, whirls in the water with
Thales. The two swim in an angelic way in the water.
Shortly thereafter, Thales contemplates with new eyes the
dock of the bay he so ardently wanted to leave. The end.
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