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On Halloween night, the timid son of Frankenstein travels to the Human Realm in search of technology that will allow his vampire crush to be seen in photographs. With the help of a teenage paranormal investigator, he takes on monster hunters, bullies, and his own insecurities before racing home to save the community that’s always rejected him.
lots of unnecessary words and seems clunky. try max the words at 25 and try again. best it also seems like this can be made in less than 10 minutes
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