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When a jaded teacher tutors a teenager stricken with cancer, they forge a unique bedside bond forcing him to reevaluate his capabilities while helping the dying student achieve some extraordinary once-in-a-lifetime goals. Based on the true story.
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Sounds like a really unique, powerful story, Mark Violi! One tiny suggestion: Add a comma before "forcing" (so the reader won't get winded while reading the second part of the logline).