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SYNOPSIS:
Scene opens on the covert theft of a powerful computer program called INTRAC. We see JACK FRANKLIN of the NSA and YURI ZHUKOV of the USSR's GRU, working together, spying on a very private meeting in a Swiss Alps chateau. They see the world's most powerful leaders gathering in secret, including Jack's boss at the NSA, MASON FORSYTHE. Jack tells Yuri he'd stole INTRAC from the CIA at Forsythe's behest. Discovered, Jack and Yuri flee in a dramatic ski chase down near vertical slopes. Inside the Chateau, the meeting continues. British banker SIR ALISTAIR MILLBROOK presides over a table of world leaders, but clearly shares power with Forsythe and BORIS KORSAKOV. They're discussing a plan that will end the Cold War, and bring the USSR "into the family of nations." But one Soviet general rises to call Korsakov a traitor and the rest arch criminals. His loyalty in question his fate sealed, Korsakov has him shot. We meet LEE RYDELL lecturing on foreign affairs at a university. In the Q&A after his speech, FIONA FORBES-HAMILTON impresses Lee with intelligent questions -- too intelligent. But when a heckler accuses Lee of still being NSA and alludes to dark events surrounding his wife's death, Lee storms from the lectern. After calming down, he attends a book signing event and Lee gives Fiona his phone number. Betrayed by Mason Forsythe, Jack Franklin has finished uploading all the secret INTRAC data to some secure location when armed men assault his safe house. He's brutally tortured by Cockney rogue operative SYD MCVICKER but won't talk. Fiona calls Lee to warn him that his friend's in danger -- she's working with Jack. Lee rushes to Jack's safe house to find his charred body. Before dying, Jack tells Lee that McVicker tortured him over INTRAC and "the Claybark Deal." As he dies, he says "Find Yuri" and the cryptic word: "Sanctuary!" Not realizing Forsythe's involvement, Lee turns to his old boss at the NSA for help, but Forsythe stonewalls him. Lee flies to Vienna to get help from his old mentor and uber-operative CONTESSA KATRINA VON WALLENBURG. They discuss Claybark, one of the world's largest banks, and Katrina tells him how to find Yuri. She puts him on a train, but is gunned down. Syd McVicker, his appearance unknown to Lee, sits down next to Lee on the train. Soldiers chase and kidnap Lee. But instead of McVicker's men, they're Yuri's. Now Lee and Yuri join forces to unravel a mystery involving the most powerful men in the world and a multi-trillion dollar conspiracy that will bring down the U.S.S.R., but at a terrible cost. To discover the truth they must first find the ultra-secret "Sanctuary of the Sharks," the redoubt where the most private people house their deepest secrets. Betrayed by Fiona, and up against unimaginably powerful adversaries, they finally confront Millbrook, Forsythe and Korsakov and at last learn the truth about the greatest crime in history: The upcoming "fall" of the Soviet Union is - a "leveraged buyout" - giving its assets including its industrial base and immense oil and gas reserves to a secret cabal who are also stealing its 11,000 metric tons of gold from it's National Treasury.
Hi Edward: Good to hear from a fellow writer and understand your concern about protecting your works. Ideas are valuable, and there are those that lurk about seeking others, assume because they've run of themselves. It is interesting that you read the logline/synopsis of SANCTUARY... would you believe it was written twenty years ago? The reality is the story (not the characters of the screenplay) is true... the failure of the USSR was not due to the failure of Communism, being the mainstream medias propaganda that was fed and eaten by the West; but, had more to do with the greed of those inside. Actually, I was in my former career exposed to what was the largest crime (heist) in the world $23.3T (as in trillion) USD. That may have been eclipsed by the more recent economic debacle? Further, the two events are enjoined, in that the event of 2007/8 followed exactly 20-years behind the original event that saw the fall of the Berlin Wall. Why? With all the exposure to financial instrument, i.e., the "alphabet of credit swaps" that forced the government (Treasury) to fund TARP (taxpayers monies), and Federal Reserve to exercise what they cleverly call QE (Quantitative Easing), being nothing more than turning on the printing presses. But not a word about a very little known banking instrument (traded among banks ONLY!) called: "7-1/2 10's"; and "7-1/2 20's". The instrument (bank debt) yields 7-1/2% interest for either 10 or 20 years. There is ONLY one payment... the last, or due date, being 10 or 20 years after the date of creation. The recent economic debacle follows exactly twenty years after the fall of the USSR. The more recent arbitrage of instruments were created to PAY-OFF the markers that became ALL DUE AND PAYABLE twenty years after issue. And the debt has been passed onto the public to eat... like it, or not! SANCTUARY was one of those stories that nobody would touch, until more recently, and strange as it may sound the screenplay is currently being considered by a Russia production company, as it is actually politically Putin positive, and the former leaders negative, and being as most are now dead nobody is the wiser except the perpetual rulers inside that have morphed from the KGB to FSB, but then again the KGB was preceded by the CHEKA - OGPU - NKVD - MGB - KGB - FSB! If, you'd like to read it can provide you a .pdf copy. Will check out your Mermaids e-book at amazon; and, feel free to ask me anything, am willing to share what I know... for whatever that is worth? Regards, Curt -END-