I love the concept, the logline gives us a nice idea of your concept but I think it works more as a logline if you use more elements of the story, like who is the main protagonist and antagonist and what the stakes are?

You might want to correct the spelling of the title on the poster

Luciano Mello Thank you for rating my logline. I agree the logline needs work. I thought of the whole concept and logline in 5mins and made the front cover in 10mins. I will definitely work on the both but I genuinely appreciate the feedback.

Nate Rymer thanks for rating my logline buddy

Judith Grace Bassat How embarrassing, Lol. In my defence. I thought of the whole concept, logline and made the front cover in less than 15mins on a train journey home. The changes will be made by the time you see this message. Thank you.

Wally Wu Thank you for rating my logline. I will have to give your Jr. Bond project a read.

Tasha Lewis thank you for rating the logline.

Evelyn Von Warnitz thank you. It's appreciated

Renata Elis Thank you