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THE STORMCHASER

THE STORMCHASER
By John Huckert

GENRE: Thriller
LOGLINE:

When the most powerful tornado ever recorded hits the US, a meteorologist/storm chaser - who as a child lost his entire family to a twister - and his dare devil adopted dad concoct a strategy to (hopefully) destroy it.

Nate Rymer

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Maurice Vaughan

This sounds like an exciting Thriller, John Huckert!!!

I suggest removing the brackets from the logline. Here's a logline suggestion: "When the most powerful tornado ever recorded hits the US, a meteorologist/storm chaser and his daredevil adopted dad concoct a way (or plan) to destroy it."

Or this: "When the most powerful tornado ever recorded hits the US, a meteorologist/storm chaser—who lost his entire family as a child to a twister—and his daredevil adopted dad concoct a way (or plan) to destroy it." But I don't think you need "who lost his entire family as a child to a twister" in the logline. I think "adopted dad" is enough.

John Huckert

Thanks Maurice, much appreciated!!

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, John Huckert. This reminds me of "Twister" but with a twist. :)

Frank Van Der Meijden

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