When the most powerful tornado ever recorded hits the US, a meteorologist/storm chaser - who as a child lost his entire family to a twister - and his dare devil adopted dad concoct a strategy to (hopefully) destroy it.
This sounds like an exciting Thriller, John Huckert!!!
I suggest removing the brackets from the logline. Here's a logline suggestion: "When the most powerful tornado ever recorded hits the US, a meteorologist/storm chaser and his daredevil adopted dad concoct a way (or plan) to destroy it."
Or this: "When the most powerful tornado ever recorded hits the US, a meteorologist/storm chaser—who lost his entire family as a child to a twister—and his daredevil adopted dad concoct a way (or plan) to destroy it." But I don't think you need "who lost his entire family as a child to a twister" in the logline. I think "adopted dad" is enough.
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This sounds like an exciting Thriller, John Huckert!!!
I suggest removing the brackets from the logline. Here's a logline suggestion: "When the most powerful tornado ever recorded hits the US, a meteorologist/storm chaser and his daredevil adopted dad concoct a way (or plan) to destroy it."
Or this: "When the most powerful tornado ever recorded hits the US, a meteorologist/storm chaser—who lost his entire family as a child to a twister—and his daredevil adopted dad concoct a way (or plan) to destroy it." But I don't think you need "who lost his entire family as a child to a twister" in the logline. I think "adopted dad" is enough.
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Thanks Maurice, much appreciated!!
You're welcome, John Huckert. This reminds me of "Twister" but with a twist. :)
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