After reading the synopsis on your website, I think a more accurate logline might be:
"After a paraplegic, suicidal, young man discovers he has Stage 4 cancer, he decides to take vengance upon those who caused his spinal injury by enlisting other terminally ill cancer patients into a squad of vigiliante asassins known as "Stage 5"."
Feel free to use.
I'm a screenwriter and filmmaker in Los Angeles and may be able to help with your project. I will email you through your website contact with more info.
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After reading the synopsis on your website, I think a more accurate logline might be:
"After a paraplegic, suicidal, young man discovers he has Stage 4 cancer, he decides to take vengance upon those who caused his spinal injury by enlisting other terminally ill cancer patients into a squad of vigiliante asassins known as "Stage 5"."
Feel free to use.
I'm a screenwriter and filmmaker in Los Angeles and may be able to help with your project. I will email you through your website contact with more info.
Cheers!
-Chris
Hey Chris,
thanks for your logline!
I will reply to your email soon.
All the best
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Powerful story idea! The logline Chris offered is more accurate to your story and more engaging, as well. :)
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