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[Pilot] Marijuana delivery driver Derek finds himself in a sticky situation when he embarks on a quest to find the elusive pot strain "Purple Eggplant Delight" that will supposedly cure his hypochondriac mother's ever evolving ailments.
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[Series] An episodic comedy series that follows marijuana delivery driver Derek's adventures delivering weed to sinners and senators in Washington D.C., highlighting the human condition of laughter and healing transcends social-economic and political hierarchies.
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It could use some more focusing and trimming, but it's still pretty good. My take:
A Cannabis Courier resorts to questing for a magical marijuana strain for his hypochondriac mother after she declines to finance his dispensary.
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Thank you BA for your feedback and suggestion
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A can see where this would be a good basis for a zany comedy.
Thank you for rating the logline and your comment. I certainly thought it would be a fun and zany series!
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Thank you for rating my logline, Nate! What's your advice on changing it to earn 5 stars?
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I'd watch this for sure