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Battle begins when a man on a date with his new boyfriend to a paintball centre bumps into his handsome Ex in a healthy relationship with the woman he left him for.
SYNOPSIS:
This is a Action/Comedy focused on LGBT+ characters.
Ajay (29) is not one for paintballing but he arrives at the paintball centre willing to participate at the request of his new boyfriend Ray (25) who is the more outgoing person out of the pair. After collecting his paintballs Ajay bumps into the back of a man and the balls spill everywhere. Ajay looks up to see that the man is his ex-boyfriend (David) standing next to the woman (Alisha). Small talk boils over into sour words which almost erupt into a full-blown argument before it is cut off by the referee announcing the rules of this last person standing red vs blue game.
The couples join their respective opposite teams on the map. For Ajay and David, this is more than a game. David wants to hold onto his self-inflated view of himself, and Ajay needs closure, but only one can get what they want. The starting claxon sounds and the teams engage in fast-paced big action (well as big as you can get with a paintball gun) which Ajay relishes in as he becomes this ruthless target-driven take command person who Ray hasn't seen before but is highly attracted to. The teams consisting of (but not limited to) teenagers, a drunk hen party, and army trainee wannabes dwindle until the last soldiers standing are Ajay and David. The two stand up from behind their walls and one emerges victorious.
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