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DARK HORSES
By Evita Prishila Anggawijaya
A clairvoyant in denial teams up with the spirit of a brutal murder victim to capture the killer before she becomes the next one to die.
SYNOPSIS:
Ivory Veranco has three secrets that she never tells anyone. First, she can see the future. Second, she knows what happened to Claire Ferrel on the day she disappeared. Third, whoever killed Claire Ferrel is coming for her next.
On the other hand, on the day Claire Ferrel goes missing, she brings a secret down to the ground with her. Waking up as a ghost, little does she know that something worse than death is coming for her.
Teaming up to find the killer, both of them learn about basic human desires, and eventually are pinned between what could've, should've, and should never be.
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I really like the title and concept, Evita Prishila Anggawijaya. I really like your logline too. The only thing your logline's missing is the inciting incident.
“After/when ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a clairvoyant in denial teams up with the spirit of a brutal murder victim to capture the killer before she becomes the next one to die."
With an inciting incident, I think your logline will be five stars.
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