This sounds like an exciting script, e5792d56f9722f3eb0984e7dd888ef99_1512291537. I can picture funny scenes for the movie.

I have two suggestions for the logline:

#1) Instead of putting "has her toughest assignment at a wellness retreat," explain what her goal in the story is

#2) Add the stakes to the logline

Maurice Vaughan: After an injury ends her military special-ops career, a female soldier turned mercenary has her toughest assignment at a wellness retreat: eliminate her target before she becomes a "happy" person.

probably don't need to say "female soldier" because we say "her" in the sentence. So maybe we can tighten this up a bit more? Like: "After an injury ends her military career, a former special-ops soldier turned mercenary faces her toughest assignment...at a wellness retreat."

I like the wellness center piece because it seems so contrary to what you'd expect. Question... is this a comedy or is it to be played seriously?

Derek C. Block: This is a comedy.

e5792d56f9722f3eb0984e7dd888ef99_1512291537 ok, cool. Thought so. In my example, the ellipsis sort of insinuate that by providing a comedic pause. I don't know if that is something you'd want to go for or not, but hopefully it is something that can help you with ideas. Best of luck!!