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SALT DADDY
By Vikki Harris
A spoiled, kept woman unexpectedly becomes the keeper of a new supposedly sugar daddy who is more salty than sugary.
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Hi Vikki! This is a super easy fix - I'd recommend changing "sugary" to "sweet" at the end so you don't repeat word "sugar."
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