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ELVEN WOOD: THE END OF A RACE
By Kendra Turner
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This is good, Kendra. Please take my advice with a grain of salt but I think this logline would flow better like this.
(A grey elf, born with dark magic beyond her understanding, must learn to control her arcane gifts before she comes of age, lest she enacts an ancient prophecy that will end elven kind.)
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