THE STAGE 32 LOGLINES
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REEL LOVE
By Dana Jackson
When inherited property puts a marketing professional in the middle of a city dispute on redevelopment he brainstorms a way to cash out while not alienating the first woman to bring him joy since his wife died.
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Hi Dana, I think what this logline needs is to clarify why your main character needs to cash out, and why he needs to hide it from the love interest.
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Thanks, B A Mason & Tasha Lewis for taking a look and rating. Molly Peck, you might be right. I see if fit his need in without making the logline too long. Thanks!